Hello everyone! I'm back again with two new poems that I like.. just wrote (within the past 24 hours). Neither are depressing, they're actually.. happy? I guess. xP Anyway, here they aree.. The first one is untitled, and the second is called "What would you do?"
"I love you," he said
As we sat by our tree
He took my hand, gently
Then looked over at me.
"I love you, too," I said
While I smiled, quite shy
I looked down at our hands
Then up to the sky.
"You're mine," He told me
And then hugged me tight
Being with him...
It just felt so right.
"Forever," I agreed
And that was no lie
I knew that, for us
There would be no goodbye.
~~
What Would You Do?
What would you do
If you would not fail?
Try to break a world record?
Or bust out of jail?
Or maybe something pure
Like try to find love?
Try to make peace
Or try to rise above?
Or maybe you'd try
To bring someone back
Back from the grave
Or back from Iraq.
Whatever you'd do
Just keep in mind
Failure's an option
For only the blind.
What do you think? Comment! I really liked these two.. I want some feedback, please[:
Of course, on the last one, I didn't mean people who were actually "blind," I meant.. blind to themselves? Or to trying? I don't know.. it just sounded right lol. So anyway, comment, please ;D I think I'll start posting once a week at least, to try to keep up on writing without it interfering with school xP Or maybe.. a theme for one day of the week? Like maybe "Fun Poem Friday!" Haha I don't know, it's just an idea..
Oh, and uh.. sorry for the lack of color on this post.. I don't know why, but it's not working]:
Signing off for now,
~Alyssa~
6 comments:
DAYUUUMM! some sexyass poems. x)
baha thank you julzerz xD
great poems lyss :]
Amazing, Best poem I've seen from Kenn Nesbits "If you give a mouse a motorcycle" !
~Pindo34~
These are amazing o;
Babeh the first on is my favorite out of all of ur poems[:
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