Hey everyone. I was working hard to make a reasonably GOOD poem for a while. I think I came out with a good one. There's been a LOT of ripped up pieces or paper, used pencils, and garbage bags in the use of writing this. I really worked on it and I hope you enjoy it as much as I do. Without further talking, here is "Turning in to a disaster".
Her and I,
It just felt so right.
So far today,
We hadn't had a fight,
But one word,
Can start such a blight.
I cant do it,
This love has been light.
It floats along,
Then the plane takes a turn,
Right to disaster.
From these mistakes, I've learned,
You cant leave,
Without getting seriously burned.
I miss you,
For your love is the only I've yearned.
Now I'm a mess,
For you, I am continuously concerned.
Well, that's pretty much it. I will try posting more frequently, too! So I look forward to that... For the record, this took me about 10 minutes to write..mostly trying to find words that rhymed[; But I think its a pretty good one.
The poem means that if your going to love someone, your going to have tough times. Love is DEFINITELY not a walk in the park. Your gonna have crash-landings and your twists and turns. If your like me, and you have a lot of opinions on things, love will be tough. But you just have to stay strong, and not get burned out. Wait for the one you TRULY love and hopefully, the plane won't have any terrorists on board[;
Thanks for reading.
~Connor~
PS. Long post, right? :D
Saturday, January 22, 2011
Turning in to a distater.
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Good job connor :D
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